Just cheking

a lil pain ,
a lil pleasure,
a lil heaping up of treasure ,
then no more gazing upon da sun,
all things must end dat have begun.
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like fragrance 4rom a flower,
like minytes 4rom an hour,
like rays from da sun,
like feet 4rom "run",
like wings 4rom da bird,
like a song nevr heard,
u;ve stolen ma heart,
oh wat have u done?
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